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Serra N


92, Jalan Saya,
Taman Penampang,
85700 Kota Kinabalu,
Sabah.

9 FEBRUARI 2011

Dear Uncle Muller,
Hi! How are you and your family ? I hope all of you and your family are well. Everyone here is in the pink of health. I am writing this letter to invite you, Aunt Mary and your children, Nicole and Jane to join us in a camping trip for the coming holidays.
Last week , we were passed by a place that would be a prefect campsite for the camping trip. So, it is in Taman Kawang that is in Papar. The place is not far from your house . It took about one and half an hour to reach there. The campsite is located near a town .We can take a bus ride and took only 20 minute to go to the town. There is a mini market also located in the town. This would be easier for us to buy things if thereâs any shortage of supplies.
The place for the campsite was very perfect. It was very clean and thereâs no rubbish seen along the place. Many greenery tree planted there and makes the place shady and cool with fresh air. It is also a peaceful place where thereâs no sound of noisy to be hear at there. The place is also safe with park rangers that on duty to help us . So, you and Aunt Mary do not need to worry about the childrensâ safety.
It is also equipped with a good and modern facilties. There is a tent for rent. It would cost cheaper if we rent for tent at there. So, we do not need to buy a tent for the camping trip. There is also a wonderful childrenâs playground. The children would most probably enjoy the playground and play until they tired. Toilets and shower rooms also is equipped at there.This would not be a problem to us as they has much facilities at the park.
Last but not least , there are some activities that we can do at the place. We can do trekking in the morning and swimming in the afternoon. It might be an enjoy experience as all of us can see the nature of this place. In the evening, we can do some interesting activities. Such as barbecue and games . Mother has a new recipe that she got from internet for the barbecued lamb. Itâs very delicious and tasty. Nicole and I can bring along with our Uno games to be played at there. We would compete each other to win the game.
Well, I have to stop now. Send my regards to Aunt Mary and your children. Thatâs all for now. Bye!
Your niece,
Serra



Answer
Edited:

Dear Uncle Muller,
Hi! How are you and your family? I hope you and your family are well. Everyone here is healthy and happy. I am writing this letter to invite you, Aunt Mary, and your children, Nicole and Jane, to join us in a camping trip for the coming holidays.
Last week, we passed by a place that would be a perfect campsite our camping trip. It is in Taman Kawang, Papar. It is not far from your house. It took about one hour and thirty minutes to reach the campsite. We can take a bus ride to the town that is twenty minutes from the campsite. There is a mini market located in the town. This would make it easy for us to buy things if there are any shortage of supplies.
The setting of the campsite is perfect. It was very clean and thereâs no trash in sight. There are many green trees and they make the campsite shady and cool, with fresh air! It is also a peaceful place with no noisy sounds. The place is also safe due to park rangers that are on duty to help us, so you and Aunt Mary do not need to worry about the childrensâ safety.
It is also equipped with good, modern facilties. There is a tent for rent. We do not need to buy a tent for the camping trip. It would be cheaper if we rent a tent. There is also a wonderful childrenâs playground. The children would probably enjoy the playground and play until they are tired. Toilets and shower rooms are also equipped there. This would not be a problem for us because they have plenty of facilities at the park.
Last but not least, there are some activities that we can do at the campsite. We can do trekking in the morning and swimming in the afternoon. It would be a pleasant experience for us to see the nature of this place. In the evening, we can do some interesting activities, such as barbecue and play games. Mother has a new recipe that she got from the internet for barbecued lamb. Itâs very delicious and tasty. Nicole and I can bring along our Uno games to be played there. We can compete with each other to win the game.
Well, I have to stop writing now. Send my regards to Aunt Mary and your children. Thatâs all for now. Bye!
Your niece,
Serra

Fill in the blank~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?




Figure Que


Vocabulary Words:
Sympathy
Terrain
Typical
Unconscious
Utensils
Wage
Waver
Withdraw
Yield

I so wish I were __________________ right now. Mom and Dad made me take this stupid camping trip with thenm and my baby brothers. They have absolutely no _________________ for me! Oops! Jonah just knocked over the tent. How _____________! Now Darren is loudly banging our cooking ______________ against a rock. Help! I wish I could ________________ to my own room---- but Idonât even have a room here !
The ___________ is so rocky Idonât know how Iâm ever going to sleep on the ground. What were Mom and Dad thinking? They didnât even _____________ in their decision about our family vacation. I tried to talk them into going to Extreme-Skateboarding Village, but they wouldnât hear of it. They threatened to leave me with a baby-sitter, so I had no choice but to __________- and put away my skateboard.
Great. Now Jonah and Darren are pretending to a battle. I guess Iâd better join in the fray. En garde!

I need an answer by 6:00 P.M May 23rd 2011.
Thank you!!!



Answer
1. unconscious
2. sympathy
3. typical
4. utensils
5. withdraw
6. terrain
7. waver
8. yield (give-in)

Could not use "wage"




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